God Next Door
Part I
Creator of life,
I indifferently destroy too
I make you float and-
I rush through you;
I am everyone.
From emotional highs
To your blue,
From furrows
Up till the wind that flew;
I am everyplace.
To you,
I am tasteless
(Unfortunately) also devoid of odor
As I stride past, breathless.
I am everything.
*
God Next Door
Part II
I suffice in arteries,
I power your cardiac batteries.
I am your head’s stability
Also find me deep,
Deep down in masticating-factories.
In rivers and seas,
Find me in Enceladus’ directories.
Sometimes amphibious-
I wander mountains,
At times through the trees.
I am Destin’s native “emerald“
Be it the “red” Bondi herald,
Even when “bioluminescent” within Maldives,
I shore up colorless in styles-
Both pretty as well as dishevelled.
*
I am formless
Yet, I am every-form.
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Still unsure of its prowess? Sprinkle a pinch of it over metallic sodium and witness the dance of fury, for it houses every skills to burn too.
..It is water!
©Soumyadeep Mukherjee; February 8, 2017.
Featured art: “Battle of the Sea” by Art Abyss
Much inspired.The pairings of each stanza are so apt tuning with the norms of rhyming.
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Thank you so much. Keep reading and stay blessed. 😇
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Can you enlighten me,in which form of poetry these rhyme schemes are applied?? Am little dubious …something Limerick and corrido??
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Since I didn’t do pre-search on that bit, it’d probably be safe to term it a (modification of) limerick only. I would be glad if you enlighten me on that part, because one can never know everything. 😅😄
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Exactly.Your apt usage made me ask you to clearify my cloud of doubts.
Sure i will let you know if i get to know.
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I’d say that the first part resembles a corrido, ‘d’ happens to be merely an addition to fine tune the first four-four line stanza. I’m unsure of the second part though.
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Ok ,thank you.Much appreciated .🍁
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I got this finally.. yayy! Second part is a 5-line stanza modification to (4-liners) Persian ruba’i which goes by the scheme “aaxa” .. I hope the explanation fits the girth of your query. 😅
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Oh grt.thnk u
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Beautiful rhythmic flow of words Soumyadeep 👍
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Thank you. This my first poem so your positive feeds matter a lot. 😇
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Keep writing. It’s really good 👍
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Thank you. Stay healthy and safe. 😇
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This is some fabulous writing.
I loved it!
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Thank you. God Bless 😇 Sparkling eyes.. 😄
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The pleasure is mine. I would be eagerly waiting for your upcoming posts. 😊
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Yayy.. 💞😇😄
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Wanted to “destroy” you, blu-ish! But no, can not 😐😂😬 because you can’t be re-created by mixing of other colors :)) ps. Still could turn u into orange or green lol
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Absolutely awed.. and puzzled as well! 😂😄👍
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Great post!!!
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Hope you will enjoy it. 🙂
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I’m glad you liked it. 😇
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Amazing poem! Great work!
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Thank you so much. May God bless you. 😇
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No problem!
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Fantastic lines so well paired and you have a great flair must say. Too good.👌👌👌👌👌👌
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Thank you so very much. Your engagement matters to me, keep reading good stuff. 😇
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Thanks dear friend will surely do. 🙏🙏🙏🙏
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I’m glad. 😇
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Great post
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Thank you, your appreciation matters a lot. Keep reading and God bless. 😇
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I have seriously turned your fan after reading all your stuff! No more words now….
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